Today’s poem of the day, entered by Michelle.
The Wintered Soul Among Wisteria
Originally published in SP Quill Magazine as the Word Wizard Challenge Winner
One need not read her horoscope to know
this woman’s fate, and though wisteria
cascades sweet blooms of lavender like snow
outside her door, it’s still Siberia
pervading the dimensions of her mind,
for not one fickle thought or patch of moss
can thrive where bleakest shadows are enshrined.
No bittersweet, no dewdrops… only loss
surrounds her heart. She tries to reminisce,
but like a barren continent grown cold,
she can’t perceive one particle of bliss.
She’s clasping grief and cannot be consoled!
Wisteria’s perfume is in the breeze,
but in her soul remains a winter’s freeze.
© Andrea Dietrich, SP Quill Magazine
Spring 2006, Volume 10
And the why:
Clearly this poem is about the death of a loved one and the grief it leaves behind for the survivor. Her struggles to continue everyday life are well documented in this piece.
Everyone feels like they’re in Siberia struggling to find their footing in a world of chaos when someone close to them dies.
‘She tries to reminisce,
but like a barren continent grown cold,
she can’t perceive one particle of bliss.’
I think everyone can relate to the previous line because your heart grows cold after such a loss. Does anyone really recover from losing a loved one? I think we just try to find a way to receive the world without those enshrined shadows and take each day as it comes.
-Michelle
I’m just surfing around reading some poetry and popped in. I also suffered recent loss and so I was kind of drawn to your poem.
That’s beautiful.
And in response to the beautiful first sentence of your final paragraph above: As the heart grows older it will come to such sights colder, by and by, nor spare a sigh, though worlds of wanwood leafmeal lie. And yet you will weep, and know why….
her soul remains a winter freeze. very touching.
Hey, just found how you showed my poem here to people way back in 2007. I am so glad you liked it! Andrea Dietrich